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When I reviewed Funeral for a Grifter, I said Book 1 spent its whole length loading the gun. Good bones, real heat, no bang. The Gospel According to Luz, Book 2 of Mickey Bloom's Blood Orange Moonrise, is out today. So the question every Book 1 reader has is simple. Does it fire?
This is not the review. The scores and the Pulp Meter come later. Today is release day, so here is what you are walking into, with no spoilers. Ruining a twist is a crime. I don't commit crimes on release day.
The setup
The back cover lays it out. Arlo Delgado buried his brother and inherited his debts: a ledger written in two hands and a burner phone that won't stop lighting up. Cricket Duarte has a gospel voice, a knife, and a little sister who has been missing since April. She doesn't trust Arlo. She has good reasons. One Friday in June. A revival tent at Mercy Flats. A man in a silverbelly Stetson. And three verses to bring Luz home.
The book keeps that promise to the hour. It runs one day, June 12, from before the sun is up to the moment the tent lights come on. Five chapters: "Smoke and Psalms," "The Burned Choir," "Saints and Sinners," "God Don’t Text" and "Hymn for the Missing." That's it. A novella with a stopwatch on it.
It opens with a flashback in the present tense. An August night at the Holy Fire Tabernacle, a white tin church outside San Diego, Texas, with a steeple welded out of drill pipe. Cricket sings in the back row with the altos. Luz, sixteen, sings up front with the sopranos. Somebody smells gasoline. Then Bloom cuts to the present, to a fairground cistern at dawn and the second bell, and Book 1's loose ends start pulling tight. Arlo shows up in a funeral suit and a white Cadillac. Cricket is already in the brush. Men with flashlights want something that is supposed to be at that cistern, and everybody has a reason not to start shooting first:
So nobody fired. That never lasts.
Two sentences. That's the whole book's pulse.
The engine
Bloom splits the day between his two leads, and that is the upgrade. In Book 1 these two orbited each other. Here they work the same problem from opposite ends on the same clock. Cricket's chapters are about the past: a burned church, a locked and scorched Bible, a hymn number written where only family would think to look. Arlo's are about the paper trail: his brother's effects, a motel key to a room in Hebbronville, a voicemail with one word on it. Bloom finds a line for the locked Bible that works as a mission statement:
A lock is a message too. It says: not you. Not yet. Not this way.
Arlo is still a grifter, and Bloom still writes him like one. At the cistern he talks his way out of a gunfight with a long, ridiculous story about a sister's feet. It is the funniest scene in the book and it is also tradecraft. Chapter 3, "Saints and Sinners," explains the method in one line:
That was the thing about a con. You didn’t have to be good. You had to be more tiring than the truth.
Tía Rosa calls from bingo. A Dairy Queen gets a recommendation. The jokes come in between the guns, which is where they belong.
Mechanics
Short declarative sentences. Clipped dialogue, questions that don't bother with question marks, Spanish woven in without footnotes. Hymns used as code. Fire, rosaries, cassette tape and hats, the motifs Bloom has been building since Book 1, all on duty. The paperback is a full-color edition with thirteen plates set through the text, and the plates carry lines of dialogue as captions, which makes them part of the plot rather than decoration.
Pacing: tight. A dawn standoff, an interrogation, two searches, a phone threat, and a hard turn late in the day that I will not describe. Bloom does not stop to recap Book 1. If you haven't read Funeral for a Grifter, read it first. This book assumes you were there last night.
Does it fire?
I said no spoilers, and I meant it. Here is what I can say. Book 1 loaded the gun. Book 2 cocks it, puts a clock on it and points it at a revival tent full of folding chairs. Whether Bloom pulls the trigger is what the full review is for.
The Gospel According to Luz is out today for Kindle and in paperback. The panel beside this piece shows which editions Amazon has listed so far, with the link for each one that is live.